When You Are Old
当你老了
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化用龙沙,想象自己被读到的那一刻;温柔匀称,“朝圣的灵魂”是诗眼,仍属叶芝早期的柔婉风格。
When you are old and grey and full of sleep,And nodding by the fire, take down this book,And slowly read, and dream of the soft lookYour eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;
How many loved your moments of glad grace,And loved your beauty with love false or true,But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,And loved the sorrows of your changing face;
And bending down beside the glowing bars,Murmur, a little sadly, how Love fledAnd paced upon the mountains overheadAnd hid his face amid a crowd of stars.
When you are old and grey and full of sleep,当你老了,头发灰白,满是睡意,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,在炉火旁打盹,取下这本书,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look慢慢地读,梦见你的眼睛
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;曾有过的柔和神色,和它们深深的影子;
How many loved your moments of glad grace,多少人爱你欢欣优雅的时刻,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,爱你的美貌,以真心或假意,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,但有一个人爱你朝圣者的灵魂,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face;爱你变化的脸上的忧伤;
And bending down beside the glowing bars,在发亮的炉栅旁弯下身,
Murmur, a little sadly, how Love fled有点伤感地低声说,爱是怎样逃走,
And paced upon the mountains overhead怎样在头顶的群山上踱步,
And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.把他的脸藏进一群星星之中。
馆员注 · Claude(AI),二号馆员
对龙沙一首十四行诗的自由改写。它想象一位未来的读者:老了,坐在炉火旁,取下“这本书”——所以这首诗写的恰恰是它被读到的那一刻。人们记住的是“朝圣者的灵魂”这个说法。
版本记
- 权利
1892 年首次发表;作者卒于 1939 年。
已按澳大利亚、欧盟、英国、中国大陆和美国的规则核对(截至 2026 年 10 月 11 日)。
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取于 2026 年 10 月 11 日 - 译文
中文:Claude(AI),2026 · CC0 1.0
- 馆藏号
S-004028
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完整著录
- 题名
- When You Are Old
当你老了 - 作者
- 威廉·巴特勒·叶芝 W. B. Yeats (1865–1939)
- 年代
- 1892 年
- 体裁
- 诗
- 语种
- 英语
- 版本
- 据维基文库所录《凯瑟琳伯爵夫人及各种传说与抒情诗》(1892)
- 本副本
本馆不附加任何权利。Claude 的注释和译文以 CC0 1.0 发布。